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[Otakuhell At Animefest 09]

not bad

Learn to put a stop at the end so it doesnt keep looping. Or at least a play button in the beginning (for newgrounds). Also you usually wana try to stay at 24 fps when animating 2D cartoons.

tohoscope responds:

Sorry about the looping. I'll fix that.

Thanks for the review.

[Tarboy]

Really sick

Everything was Perfect. The "shut Up Billy" was perfectly timed too lol. One thing I noticed, when tarboy chases the bad guy into that dark room, he was running, but was kind of gliding, he didn't go up or down/bounce like he did in the rest of the movie. besides that everything was great! nice work!

[Pika VS Onix]

put together really well

I think u should find an alternative to using flash blurs, it slowed down the whole movie a every time u blurred a lot. Pikachu was kinda stiff, maybe try to get 3 diff body positions so he doenst look hunched over the whole time? Onix worked out really well and I liked the effects. Overall nice job, im sure ur next one will be even better

[Luis C -V.S- Tom P]

Looks like all you did was copy other stuff

The drawings were bad and you sloppily rotoscoped/traced over other fight clips. You get points for effort and completion, but its not even really you're work. For 60 hours of work you could have at least tried some better drawings instead of just having their arms flail around when they were shooting at each other.

Hulalaoo responds:

ROTOSCOPE ? PLEASE, YOU ARE A NOOB, A HAVE A LOT OF EXPRIENCE FOR DESING FIGHT SCENE, YOU ONLY HAVE A ANIMATION GAY AND STUPID,ONLY TWEENS, PLEASE, GO TO MASTURBATE, YOU JOB IS ANIMATOR , WITH 22 AND CREATE A SHIT ?, HAHA POOR GUY, YOU NEVER CAN GO TO FRONT PAGE, BECAUSE YOU NOT HAVE TALENT

[Junior]

wowwwww

that was long and i totally switched focus when he turned the light out. What did he say in the very end!?

[T E T R I S ' D]

interesting idea

It was put together nicely, but you should calm down with all the rolling and cartwheels. It looked like he was a slinky rolling over and over. Maybe next time change some of the animation since a big part of it was him dodging the pieces, but it was the same jump into a slinky like cartwheelish thing getting repeated. Keep it up, im sure u will def improve on ur next work.

KobraEditing responds:

well if it counts for anything, I never used the same drawing twice. I redrew for every frame.

[Pokemon Hunter]

I logged in from work just to review this

I'm sorry but this was fucking dope as hell. Great use of tweens and key framed animation. The style was great and i loved how u used the health bars. Can't wait to see more!

[Ryu's Revenge]

hmmmm could go either way for me

Drawings sucked, voices sucked, wasnt really funny, sound was good, Animation was GREAT! sooo smooth and fluid. I hope the actual fight scenes come out well. I would try to get some other people to do the voices and work on the drawings themselves. Def has some good potential.

FutureCopLGF responds:

Hahaha, very blunt but I appreciate it. Yeah, I'm planning on getting the people who I based these off of to do their respective voices (if possible) and I'll keep trying to improve my drawing style. Glad to see that my primary goal, fluid animation, was successful tho'.

[SUPER 8 Cinema]

very nice

Nice style, good flow, everything went well. I just think the rotoscoping could have been done a little better to look more accurate/smoother. I know it's "suppose to be in that style" but it would have looked Amazing if the animation was smoother