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Nice

Nice drawings and style. Simple yet effective. i know everyone said it was kind of short. I guess cuz not much happened besides the creature destroying a bit of stuff. Maybe if something more happened to keep epople in suspense waiting for the next episode? Good vid tho, a lot better than most of what ppl put up here lol

good and bad parts

Drawing, music was all good, but animaiotn was a lil slow. The guy and Ninja walked really awkward which was kind of distracting to me. The story was a good base but i think u coulda done better to keep us entertained, after awhile I got kind of bored.

wayyy toooo short

Things like this have to be a longer or do some really crazy stuff. Not just loop a couple seconds of frames

nice idea

actual actor could have done a lil better to make the movie overall better.

Could be a lot better

lol, i have yet to see many blond green eyes Colombians lol.

Nice video, but ur animation/movements and drawing need work. Story was nice and the voices/sound and effects were good. Some good jokes, but the animation just took away from it cuz there was barely any movement and the times there were it was very stiff and robotic. I say work on ur drawing skills and learn some better animating techniques and u can have a pretty good series on here.

Neo-Egyptian responds:

I do indeed need to add more movement to the characters, thanks for the review.

just incase u didnt know

the smoking law is so people who dont smoke dont have to breathe in smoke when leaving or entering a building b/c someone wants to stand in front of their office to light one up.

Yeah some of these are funny in a way, but would be funnier if u animated the laws. Otherwise its just a slide show or something u could have done on power point.

I know this was posted a long time ago, but just whatevs, saw it now.

PlayTheGame responds:

k ....

you def should have put more time into it

y rush it to put something that doesnt look too good? you coulda put more time and made it better, the arrow was really weird looking, u coulda just screen shotted an arrow cursor and used that. And you have it submit to another site thats not newgrounds took away from it. Maybe on the other site its a better idea, but you should have made a diff version.

could be better

Don't get lazy with the animations, this has much more potential. You don't always need action, but at least keep everything smooth and looking good.

not very useful

it was way to fast to even really read

still great

Great animation and use of 3d (i think lol)
I have to agree, stop using the imported images, theyre taking away from ur movies. Acting and voices are a little corny, if you can get better ones then it will be almost perfect.

Bringing Life to the Inanimate.

Meshach Rojas @M-Shack

Age 37, Male

Making stuff move

NYC

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